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Bedtime on the Beach
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Bedtime on the Beach

by Cam Held

Gallery: WildlifePosted November 14, 200991 views5 comments
This is a photo of a sleeping juvenile Galapagos Sea Lion, taken on San Cristobal Island. I was exploring the island in the afternoon, and discovered a sea lion colony, that I photographed until sunset. I love the light on this image. I know some may not like the OOF foreground (Brad, your reputation precedes you, I'm new here and I already know! :biggrin: ) I t is also lacking a background, but I wanted to focus the attention on the sea lion, and the light on the sand in front of him.
I've contemplated cropping some of the foreground away, but I feel it weakens the comp. I'd love feedback on this, and anything else you can think of. Thanks!

Tech:
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
Tamron 28-300 f/3.5-6.3 @ 84mm f/5.6
1/200 sec
ISO 400

Comments

5 comments
Comment posted by Cam Held on November 14, 2009 at 5:05 PM
Looking at the larger photo it appears that the sea lion's face isn't entirely sharp. My RAW file is sharp, so maybe its just the result of compression? :confused:
Registered on November 12, 2009, 59 Posts, 398 Comments
Comment posted by Rick Gomez on November 14, 2009 at 11:27 PM
Cool shot with some great lighting! :toast:
Registered on March 3, 2007, 206 Posts, 1853 Comments
Comment posted by Brad Hill on November 15, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Hey Cam,

Here I was trying to take the weekend off (and do some shooting) and then you go use my name in vain! :wink:

I really like the lighting in this image and how it's kissing sand trail leading to the sea lion. The out-of-focus nature of the extreme lower foreground doesn't bother me for being out of focus (more on this below), but I simply wonder if it adds much to the image (i.e., is there simply a little too much foreground?). To my eye the image would be stronger if only that foreground with the great lighting on it was included (which might require a bit of the background to go as well in order to balance the image an fine-tune the placement of the sea lion in the frame). As posted the image is very peaceful and tranquil...

Now, regarding the misquote about me not liking out-of-focus foregrounds! :wink: . I have nothing inherently against out-of-focus foregrounds (or, for that matter, backgrounds). What usually doesn't work well for my personal taste is when there are 3 distinct bands of focus that run completely across the frame - an out-of-focus background, and in-focus subject, and an out-focus-background. It's my experience that this is normally most noticeable (and least pleasing to me) in horizontally oriented images. I dislike it for a number of reasons. First, having two different sharpness gradients (out-of-focus to in-focus, and the reverse) is asking a lot of the viewer to take in, i.e., it's often too complex. Second, while all images are, to a degree, "unnatural" and a function of the photographer's viewpoint, to my eye having 3 bands of focus is simply too unnatural. It's also simply an artifact of the lens and screams "long telephoto" just a little too loudly for me (i.e., for me the image almost instantly becomes about the equipment rather than the scene). That being said, I think that using selective focus can be a great tool to draw emphasis to the subject - it just has to be done carefully. Heck, I've published lots of images (print and electronic) with ONLY the subject in focus (like this grizzly shot) - but I don't think you'll ever find one with 3 edge-to-edge focus bands in it!

One last point: What I think about an image should be your absolute last concern. Bigger concerns should be about producing images that YOU like or, if you're selling images, what your buyers like!

Cheers...very nice shot...

Brad
Registered on May 29, 2007, 431 Posts, 6061 Comments
Comment posted by Vincent Grafhorst on November 15, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Sweet image Cam. I like the soft light. This image needs the FG to be effective I agree, but still I would be tempted to crop just a tiny bit from the bottom. A bit in-line with Brad's suggestion, but I would not crop all the way to where the light falls on the sand as I feel that would harm the comp.
The larger image looks a bit soft indeed, did you sharpen the jpeg before posting?
Registered on February 24, 2006, 504 Posts, 7203 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Sharp on November 19, 2009 at 4:35 PM
I think you could safely crop to a 4x5 ratio without compromising composition. Lovely light!
Registered on December 9, 2007, 258 Posts, 9892 Comments