In an effort to try something that had not been done with snow monkeys before, I shot a series of images using remote flash on last year's Japan trip.
Here's another one from those sessions. It is different from
the one I posted earlier because I underexposed the ambient light here more, resulting in an almost black and featureless background.
When I look at this image from a purely artistic point of view, I'd be tempted to tone down the background even more in post processing, losing all remaining detail.
I'd be curious to hear if you agree, or if you prefer to keep the background detail in.
Comments
19 comments- Luke
Now that I look this jpeg version again, I realize there is not much detail left in the background, certainly not at this size. If you want to have a better look at what's still there, check out the larger version - most of the detail is in the upper right corner.
When I look at the original file now, I must say that the background detail is starting to annoy me. I initially left it in because that's how I shot it, but now I think that it doesn't really has a purpose - there, I answered my own question.
I actually like the subtle reflections of the snow monkey. My recommendation would be to crop some off the bottom to put more emphasis on the monkey. Maybe a 3:4 or 4:5 ratio. Nonetheless, this is a marvelous image!
I particularly like the level of light on the face, which brings out enough color and detail without going overboard. With the slight ripples reflecting the light, it has the look of the subject being lit by a moonbeam.
Max
I would vote to leave it as is, it is gorgeous as posted. The detail I can see in the background in the larger image is minimal and it does not detract one iota from the main subject.
BTW, I really love your use of light in your images Marsel. I have started to experiment with flash on and off camera lately and was wondering what method you might recommend for learning?
With snow monkeys, one is used to seeing high-key images, as a low key image, this really shock the senses. As an experiment, it's definitely a success. Somehow, I feel that reflection is not adding much to the frame.
Jagdeep Rajput
Excellent photo Marsel and I like the reflection, despite the fact that the reflection is not smooth and clear and would definitely leave that in.
Sorry I'm late jumping into this - been away from NPN for a few days...
Very striking image, to say the least. On my monitor the background is pretty much without any detail already, and it's my opinion that this works very well. I personally like the faint reflection very much - I'd DEFINITELY keep it if the image were mine. My only "nit" pertains to an issue of personal preference - I think the current positioning of the snow monkey would be absolutely perfect if it were looking directly at you (not that I wish it was!). But, given the direction it's looking I think the image would work slightly better for me if there was just a sliver more room on the left side of the frame (and a sliver less on the right). But as posted this is obviously an excellent image (which is what we've come to expect from you).
Cheers...thanks for sharing this...
Brad
For the rest I actually agree with Brad on this one, would love it to either have the monkey stare right at you, or some more room on the left (and not by cropping because that reflection is great as well
Another very inspiring and artistic image, I keep wondering what you'll come up with next!